I find your confusing mess of what you call an Artist Comments section. It's one thing to put nothing, It's another to put random words. In fact you sound like a child. I am assuming you meant "Why don't now (or know?) what say (.or?)" No matter how I look at it that makes no sense, I am assuming you could have meant "I don't know what to say" Awful lot of mistakes in the beginning. It also does it add to your flash you may as well have had nothing.
Bitching aside I do kind of like this flash
The art seemed Amateur, which is not a bad thing everyone starts out somewhere, I would suggest working on drawing anatomy. The flash seems pretty good, minus some choppy areas, the song seems to fit in well with the clip (until it loops.) Some sound effects would have been nice but I am glad you didn't use horrible cheep sound effects that everyone uses.
Over all it is a decent flash, You should learn some English (or just type in whatever language you speak, we have Google for a reason) And work on the art a bit. With time I could see a great improvement.
I hope I've helped
I used to draw with a mouse fairly well actually. On paint at least.
I do have to say your hand looked rather deformed on the mouse, since it was out the outside. Thumbs more then likely are on the side of your hand close to your body, On the right hand it will be on the left and on the left it will be on the right.
Other wise I thought it was a fairly good flash. A bit blocky (or choppy?) but I am not a flash animator so I don't know how to fix that to help you.
Oh lol you noticed the hand thing. Yeah, I already animated it and I'm like whatevs but then I accidentally did it again. Thanks for the review! :)
I like that this one is longer (I know the first one was for a project correct?)
I don't have much else to say... Other then I love the Great destiny man flashes. Please continue the good work!
I'm only giving a four star, as I would for some of my old favorite games because of the ending. I feel like all my hard work was for nothing. We don't see if she ACTUALLY wishes the village back or who the blue haired girl is all it is is a flash of light.
I understand that concept of open ending but for a game like this? Golly I put in enough work I want a big finally. It was very anti climactic.
Which is sad because my want to see her though and see what happen is what kept me going though even at my 200 life loss at 2-1 (It is really late and a bunch of them where me dosing off in the middle)
Again it's a really great game, as people have said, it's way to hard at the start and easy at the end. I think you should have switched the order to Castle, Mines and then Snow Fields (graveyard?) There where also times when I wasn't even near an object and it killed me, while other times I had stepped back after going though half a ghost and not dying.
Also it was fairly short other then the dying bits. If I was better with my coordination I could have flown though the game. I heard you where making a second game to this (though other reviews) So I hope this helps sort of.
I actually really liked the voice acting. :3
The sequel will answer most of these things, I didn't expect the reception I got, thank you for the review!
After I got the Ending where she was on the moon, I put him next to her and she keeps playing the harp for him.
It was really short but to the point. Although It took me a bit to get all the endings. You can actually do them all at once, I don't know weather this is bad or good...
You can do all the endings with out rewinding.
1.) Put him on the Boat, the moon will float away.
2.) Switch him and her, she'll play the harp for him.
3.) After that you can take a picture of the little moon, and give it to him for another ending.
4.) Put them on The seagull .
5.) Throw them in the water.
The game itself is good, the dressing up there is no problems but the actual problem is the game. Sometimes it hits twice, sometimes Ace's don't work and sometimes it skips my turn, so I have 10 and I can't hit.
If that was fixed I'd love it.
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